很好看呀,修了之后顺畅多了。 5 w- N7 T! v; r: P : i- `5 u, @4 d( t Rstore.yayabay.com其实有时我也在想,那些写虐文和各种乱斗文的作者们,他们自己看了不烦么?XDD作者: 横走的螃蟹 时间: 2013-3-9 09:36 标题: 标题
回复 8#barbamama - \6 g) M7 U Q3 p& ]( E华人论坛 华人论坛, 股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer/ g: u3 m+ @4 N' i
捂脸~我太惭愧了,准确来说我这么久就才写三章丫丫的港湾 小说 股坛 海外华人 yayabay.com 全球华人. }8 t8 z( T* c( T/ j4 O, U% I+ v
你的已经填完一个坑,又挖了一个⊙﹏⊙b汗) * y4 F6 R4 R& e 头回有人夸我*^O^* ( D2 o& c' s5 O7 Y. M. d丫丫的港湾 小说 股坛 海外华人 yayabay.com 全球华人 本来我真的想写悲剧文的,但文笔不好,女主写的像死人一样作者: barbamama 时间: 2013-3-9 11:58
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/ I' \9 y0 M. j7 P% B. I华人论坛别写悲剧啦,自己也会跟着难受的,开开心心的多好呢?5 \8 Z+ K i( j, H
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象据我所知,顾漫就是因为要转换心情才写欢乐小白文,写着写着人也跟着高兴起来,压力什么的也缓解啦~华人论坛! T1 N E! o* z' P
0 V- U& O( ^0 C) e5 P全球华人的自由讨论天地 ) e( U/ C( C u! z \丫丫的港湾 小说 股坛 海外华人 yayabay.com 全球华人 我再说一遍,这真的是个悲伤的故事。T^T嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤…… 8 J* q* r& U; B- M4 Y }华人论坛, 股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer & { L2 u) d/ e. k3 I+ ]& G全球华人的自由讨论天地 9 c4 y" |2 g# u0 F4 O4 L" _. X
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不怕神一样的对手,就怕猪一样的队友。全球华人的自由讨论天地 1 [! o' e( `* s7 U, G' }
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6 Y x/ J/ |5 @3 ] j2 m2 O; ~华人论坛『这是聂达鲁的诗,哈哈不要介意啊,其实我也朦朦胧胧不怎么懂。嗯,所有看不太懂的文学对我来说都好诗意╭(╯ε╰)╮ - v6 @2 A$ x: ^* I华人论坛I like for you to be still,it is as though you were absent, " q. D% R l K7 ^全球华人的自由讨论天地 and you hear me from far away,and my voice does not touch you. `, J# T7 i, `/ X( l全球华人的自由讨论天地 It seems as though your eyes had flown away ,and it seems that a kiss had sealed your mouth.华人论坛, 股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer3 L8 e9 b' @' U l2 X: w; o
As all things are filled with my soulstore.yayabay.com1 P! M$ D# I4 b8 n
you emerge from the things, filled my soul.store.yayabay.com+ l6 s" U% }2 [; B0 ~# \. Y
You are like my soul, a butterfly of dream, and you are like the word Melancholy.全球华人的自由讨论天地 - \8 _$ H c3 [7 `! W, s
I like for you to be still,and you seem far away.华人论坛, 股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer& J# N) b/ _) F
It sounds as though you were lamenting, a butterfly cooing like a dove. ( R2 ^4 J0 g: G/ y丫丫的港湾 小说 股坛 海外华人 yayabay.com 全球华人 And you hear me from far away and my voice does not touch you:华人论坛, 股坛,马里兰,佛吉尼亚,中餐, 華人, 黄页, 北美华人, 海外华人, 海外论坛, 马里兰, 海外小说网, insurance, hotels, auto, rental, mortgage, travel, credit, refinance, extended stay, film, computer, stocks, furniture, loans, doctor, lawyer7 t( n" K4 Q, |( b
Let me come to be still in your silence. # [) f% u2 B0 V0 C1 e& Z And let me talk to you with your silence 4 _# _5 O, I5 T! Z. B$ Mstore.yayabay.com that is bright as a lamp,simple as a ring.全球华人的自由讨论天地 3 v& Y+ q5 c$ N) g: F7 m, k( X( h
You are like the night, with its stillness and constellations. ) ? \! J$ b6 Q/ n6 ]8 _& Q全球华人的自由讨论天地 Your silence is that of a star, as remote and candid. " u1 m+ f: `) t w. Q. Y! F全球华人的自由讨论天地 I like for you to be still, it is as though you were absent,丫丫的港湾 小说 股坛 海外华人 yayabay.com 全球华人$ K" m: I3 W- Y5 S. p& P$ |
distant and full of sorrow as though you had died. ' \) ]5 J1 t3 W. J" K7 _4 tstore.yayabay.com One word then,one smile,is enough.华人论坛# f# T7 n/ u8 f+ H
And I am happy, happy that it's not true.